Cheeky Monkey

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Hi All,
Took this pic with my first dslr. I am a total noob at photography so please critique as much as you can. i need all the help i can get.
kit used: sony a350, 18 - 70 lens @ 50mm, f/5.6, 1/125 s, iso 100
slight increase in temp with photoshop

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look forward to your comments:woot:
 
Nice image, the background is bit messy though.
Always watch the background.
 
As saglik says the background is a bit messy but sometimes it cannot be avoided, I would also say the image looks a bit flat and lifeless so I had a quick go using the following steps:

1. Firstly I adjusted the basic exposure using some curves layers to add a bit more contrast. Link to tutorial

2. The eyes were a but dull and lifeless so I used my eye pop technique although I realise I have overdone it on the small file size but I left it like this so you could see what a difference it can make. Link to tutorial

3. Finally I added a very slight vignette to concentrate the eye and gave it a slight sharpen (I may have overdone the sharpening).

Hope this helps!

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Nice edit Hacker.
The image looks much better.
I checked the tutorials as well and they are very informative.
Thanks
 
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