Hi Les,Ok feed back it is
1. China town has such a vast array of colours- why shoot or convert to mono?
2, Eye contact would have been nice with the subject sat down
3. He is far to central in the image for me
Just a few initial thoughts
Les
Hi Alan,I'm ok with the balance with the ladies in the middle and blokes on either side and I'm ok with no eye contact so all in all I do like it but Les does make a point which could be valid but as you took the picture Raymond colour or B&W is down to you
Hi Gramps,I'm guessing that colour would have been manic with this type of setting.
Hi Alan,I don't mind the mono, there is nice contrast in the scene
the side of the guys head is very bright, perhaps burnt out? because he's bright relative to the rest of the scene, he's the subject.. but he's just sat there, side-on doing nothing.. so personally, I dont find it very interesting.
there are nice layers in the scene though, with the guy on the left and lady in the background.
Sorry, for the late reply was busy. Thank you, for giving me feedback.So what if it is ''Manic'' all those colours would be spectacular.
I would like to see the colour version, yes it would be manic but it’s a manic city. It’s great that on the far left you have New York City on the T-shirt to identify the city.
Thank you, I wish the actual one would be able to upload.And that is very nice too Raymond
Though this is in colour (and generally I like colour) this example is duller than the B&W version.View attachment 353884
Sorry for the late reply, and thank you for the feedback. Here is the color edit for some reason it's not showing the one I edited.
Thank you for the feedback for some reason the one I edited won't show up.Though this is in colour (and generally I like colour) this example is duller than the B&W version.
Thank you for the feedback; I must be doing something wrong when I try to upload it. It will only show the unedited one for some reason, and I don't know why that keeps happening. Do you have that issue when you try to upload photos?He's in interesting light but it hasn't caught his face and ultimately the main feature is a bored bloke on a phone.
I like the guy with the paper and the woman at the very back though. Maybe.. if you cropped the right and top & did some dodging to bring out the 4 people in the back it would make a stronger image?
haven't heard of that before, sorryThank you for the feedback; I must be doing something wrong when I try to upload it. It will only show the unedited one for some reason, and I don't know why that keeps happening. Do you have that issue when you try to upload photos?
Thanks.haven't heard of that before, sorry