Critique Christmas in Provence.

[Graham]

I saw this Ivy creeping up a tree and as it had been raining and with the green fungal stuff I thought it looked nice.

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Christmas in Provence, Sleeping Vines in the vinyards.
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Any crit please fire away.

 

[Tintin124]

Good set Graham,

I think on the Ivy it needs a bit more punch to make the Ivy Pop. Also a little more DOF would also help but nice find.

Vines there is too much distraction getting to focal point I would have tried stand further to the right and little more back to get a different angle.

 

[Ulfric M Douglas]

The colours are too vague for me, want more green
and the nearest vines being OOF is losing me some niceness.
I'd like a deeper DOF on Number 2 or the focal area coming much more forward. Also those two grey (alloy?) sticks are irritating. Clone 'em out!

 

[Graham]

Thanks, I see what you mean, I agree that No1 needs a boost of colour of and No2 probably does need the poles cloning out but they are part of the field /crop. be my guest if you want to boost the green and clone the poles, I don't do PP except a little sharpening