vkvedam Messages 105 Name Ven Vedam Edit My Images Yes 11 Mar 2010 #1 Comments, suggestions and critique please... Cheers
PsiFox Prefers Mac over PC any day Messages 7,240 Name Mark Edit My Images Yes 11 Mar 2010 #2 Sorry but for me there is no visual impact on this image. The front right of the basket is too dark. There is part of a packet going out of frame top right. I think the basket is just to big and the packets too reflective. Perhaps try having the basket tipped over with some beans spilling out of one of the packets.
Sorry but for me there is no visual impact on this image. The front right of the basket is too dark. There is part of a packet going out of frame top right. I think the basket is just to big and the packets too reflective. Perhaps try having the basket tipped over with some beans spilling out of one of the packets.
OP vkvedam Messages 105 Name Ven Vedam Edit My Images Yes 11 Mar 2010 #3 Well, thanks for the tips. It's in Starbucks and I am not allowed to do any alterations. It's just a random B/W shot that I took.
Well, thanks for the tips. It's in Starbucks and I am not allowed to do any alterations. It's just a random B/W shot that I took.
R robinb Messages 221 Name Robin Edit My Images Yes 11 Mar 2010 #4 It is not a very interesting shot.
sbowler579 Messages 15,454 Name Steve (Being Kind) Edit My Images Yes 11 Mar 2010 #5 I think the basket would look better in colour.
ki_user Messages 2,675 Name Lee Edit My Images Yes 11 Mar 2010 #6 Process the guts out of it and it might have more impact.
DJMorgan Messages 1,105 Name Daniel Edit My Images No 11 Mar 2010 #7 I love it, I mean if more of the basket was showing then It would look great, nice try matey anyway See at least not all of us are boring
I love it, I mean if more of the basket was showing then It would look great, nice try matey anyway See at least not all of us are boring
ki_user Messages 2,675 Name Lee Edit My Images Yes 11 Mar 2010 #8 Any better??? I'm not sure, I tried a couple of ideas, hope you don't mind.
OP vkvedam Messages 105 Name Ven Vedam Edit My Images Yes 12 Mar 2010 #9 Thank you all for the tips. Hey Ki, I like the coffee bean theme you've got in there.