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Very nice processesing and clever use of the frame.
Like the DoF and room to look into, I wonder what she's pondering about.
Like the DoF and room to look into, I wonder what she's pondering about.
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"What the hell have i done" perhaps?
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That's an awesome set of eyelashes the woman has there, Stevie. It's a wonder she could keep her eyes open!
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The more I look at those eyelashes, the more certain I am that she's got them on the wrong eyes, but whatever ...
#1 is a bit limp AFAIC but nicely done all the same despite your problem with that background
#2 works better than it ought to for me - and gosh, what long legs yon chap on the left has!
#3 is very well seen, and for me it's only let down a bit by the missing arm.
#4 we never had a bride parachute in like that, but that's well caught. Not too sure about the exposure/processing, but wtf. Maybe try cropping out that greenery on the l/h edge and see if you reckon that's an improvement?
#5 the fact that apparently they've never kissed before spoils it for me. What would have made it an absolute cracker IMO is if they stayed as they were but both looked straight at you, laughing.
#6 is very close indeed AFAIC despite those bloody eyelashes. The crop/composition is all that's bugging me slightly, but I can't put my finger on why ...
#1 is a bit limp AFAIC but nicely done all the same despite your problem with that background
#2 works better than it ought to for me - and gosh, what long legs yon chap on the left has!
#3 is very well seen, and for me it's only let down a bit by the missing arm.
#4 we never had a bride parachute in like that, but that's well caught. Not too sure about the exposure/processing, but wtf. Maybe try cropping out that greenery on the l/h edge and see if you reckon that's an improvement?
#5 the fact that apparently they've never kissed before spoils it for me. What would have made it an absolute cracker IMO is if they stayed as they were but both looked straight at you, laughing.
#6 is very close indeed AFAIC despite those bloody eyelashes. The crop/composition is all that's bugging me slightly, but I can't put my finger on why ...
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I suspect she isn't too keen on her nose and the detail in her left cheek.....Wish I could say I haven't been around because I was busy - haven't really.
