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I will address this again , with the flooring etc. Thank you for your time in respondingI like the tones and black cut off. Quite dreamy.
how would it look if the floor line was horizontal? And the left toe could be all in the frame, or cropped a bit more.
Thank you for your comment, I will see if this can be removedI find the Bamboo very distracting.
@cargo , looking at the image I do like the colouring of the image , I will look at other photo's to see if the toe is in shot. With limited time of 6 min I felt this particular set was rushed by myself hence the missing toeAs @woof woof as stated of it were mine I would be miffed about the toe cut off. That said my gut unstinct when I first seen the image was that's a lovely photod the light on the skin really does give it a tactile look.
I'm not good at explaining why I like something but I do like this.
Well done.
Gaz
@juggler , Thank you for your constructive comments most appreciated. I have other images as previously mentioned so will work on them. The bruises that you pointed out on her legs I hadn't given a thought good spot. The fact she is a kick boxer would I suppose cause a lot of skin blemished which need to be sortedIt's very nice, there's lots to like. And it's a gazillion times better than my early attempts at studio photography.
The framing is a bit off. Have you got another in the set which is better? Alternatively, make it look deliberate by cropping a bit tighter & straightening up.
I don't mind the bamboo at all - there are a couple of minor bits and pieces I'd clone out but not loads. (The marks on the paper, the one horizontal bamboo leaf, the skin folds at the side and the bruises on the legs.)
The lifted black point isn't too my taste but that's not to say it's wrong.
The thing I don't like about it isn't fixable by processing.. when models look at the light like this it's as if they or the photographer don't know what else to do. The pose also looks to be putting a fair bit of effort into the neck and left shoulder. It'd have looked much more dreamy if you asked her to fold her arms lightly and then lay her head on her arms.
Most nude models are fairly physical people.. Ayla is no exception, I've photographed her a couple of times.@juggler , Thank you for your constructive comments most appreciated. I have other images as previously mentioned so will work on them. The bruises that you pointed out on her legs I hadn't given a thought good spot. The fact she is a kick boxer would I suppose cause a lot of skin blemished which need to be sorted