Elle with backlight

[photographerian]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/ianmccullochphotos/3370777050/sizes/l/in/set-72157615683458496/

 

[chivers67]

Great lighting but what's going on with the girls nose - it seems really undefined and totally out of focus/soft?

 

[Yv]

great light and lovely conversion, but again, where is her nose?

 

[psenior1]

looks like it could be a great pic but the PP has been massively overdone on the nose and cheeks...

 

[photographerian]

Doh, I'd never noticed that. Will redo later.

Thanks for comments

 

[chivers67]

Doh, I'd never noticed that. Will redo later.

Thanks for comments

Post it back on this thread, I'm sure it will then be a great portrait

 

[photographerian]

Had another go with this one. Now one in colour and one in BW.

Not to good with studio stuff, my main line of work is sport.

But do enjoy the studio stuff. More of a hobby than the real job.

www.flickr.com/photos/ianmccullochphotos/3373989478/sizes/l/in/set-72157615683458496/

 

[Betty]

Am I the only one that can see pink splodges on her neck and hand?

 

[natjag]

Yep, I can see the pink splodges. It's much better though. Initially you mentioned the lighting, which your first post had other stuff in need of addressing. I like the back light. I would like to see her head more rim lit if possible. But it is very good and effective.

 

[antc]

Am I the only one that can see pink splodges on her neck and hand?

Yeah i can see them as well.