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[georgebou]

this was a photo from a project i did for my alevel
c+c welcome

 

[frankee]

nice shot :O i like how it works

 

[dazzajl]

I like the idea George but it's missed the spot for me. I'd like to see some part of the subject sharp, even if you've chosen for that not to be the eyes. Also, I'd like to see some definition in the hair. Doesn't need to be much but enough to show where her head is against the background.

I don't want to seem like I'm being too critical here but one more thing that caught my eye was the way the light has made the inside of her right arm look a little odd, like it's bumpy.

 

[georgebou]

noo i understand that you say it to help me so ill keep it in mind for next time. thanks