First Time shooting birds

[MSPhotographic]

seen as it was such a nice day i descided to have a go at bird photography
C&C welcome

2011-04-0856526 by stansfieldmark99, on Flickr

 

[Gordon D]

I like it, nice colour and DoF... could do with a tighter crop imo though

 

[MSPhotographic]

2011-04-0846576 by stansfieldmark99, on Flickr

how about this ??

 

[MSPhotographic]

just added the croped picture what do you think

 

[artyman]

Good effort for first time, perhaps up the contrast a touch.

 

[Gordon D]

Much better imo

Good job.