First train long exposure

[lane adam]

Can any one give me any feedback please image by adam1654, on Flickr

 

[Simplythebeast]

I like this but Im not sure about what appears to have been a second train closer to you? Looks like it was stationary and departed.that takes away from the image for me.

However its definitely better than any Ive taken!

 

[lane adam]

It was just leaving the platform i was hoping for a train that went straight through but it didn't happen I might have to find somewhere else

 

[MWHCVT]

It'a not bad at all for a first effort it is for a me a little under exposed it also looks like its ever so slightly leaning ...this type of thing really is all about timing to get the look that your after

Matt