Hello interested in what you think of Model shoots

Hi,

the posing may be OK, but I can't understand why do you use wideangle?! Get a long prime, lets say 85 (minimum), 100, 135mm or 200mm and there will be no more temptation to go the easy way. You will be amazed by the difference it can make.

This may be comparable with what you aimed, and could still be improved a lot.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/daugirdas/sets/72157608186006117/

Hope that helps.
 
for the 2nd photo, the model's legs look twisted

for some of the shots, everything seems to be in focus (probably due to the small aperture), a little background blur should improve the shots
 
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