I love the first better (with the second, I would have set the aperture to have them in focus and stood a little more to the right/front of them. love the scene though, can see why you picked it)
as I say, love the first, great clarity, am a sucker for a characterful face. Might be worth experimenting with cropping, so that she sorts kind of sits in one half of the picture, I think maybe cropping a little off of the left side. Would also love to see it in black and white but that's cos I'm a fan of it...!