Jessica

[Dan_H]

Just after a bit of feedback on this shot.

Was doing a shoot with my friend and his daughter the other day and trying to think of some poses to get them into etc and thought i'd try something with his tattoo.

Not sure if it works or not, or if it just looks odd with his arm coming in from nowhere.

Thoughts??

any other crit always welcome.


Jessica by Daniel_Howes, on Flickr

 

[mincie]

Looks good to me.

 

[On the Huh]

Sorry, for me that arm doesn't work, I agree with you it looks odd.

 

[Dan_H]

I really like the idea though, so any ideas on how it could have been done better?

The missus really likes it, so it seems to be a bit hit or miss.

Will have to see what my mate thinks as i suppose he is the one that matters at the end of the day.

Doesnt stop me wanting to strive for better pictures though.

 

[cambsno]

Cant decide, in some ways it looks good, but in other ways its not quite right??

 

[williams359]

i think it would work better if you could see her hands holding the arm. The image is a little flat (all grey) and you have lost the top of her head. Nice idea