Joe's Second shoot tonight

[Paul Tomlinson]

I had a great time Joe and thank you very much and i hope to be able to photograph you again sometime, maybe at the studio where we would have more room. If anyone would like to leave there comments then please do we can only get better.
Paul Tomo

 

[The_Bulb]

Number 1 for me has a distracting shadow of her glasses on her right eye and on number 2 I think the higher of her two hands has been cropped too tightly.

I think the two images are nicely exposed and are sharp though

 

[Paul Tomlinson]

Number 1 for me has a distracting shadow of her glasses on her right eye and on number 2 I think the higher of her two hands has been cropped too tightly.

I think the two images are nicely exposed and are sharp though

nice one Richard the reason for the harsh shadow is i didn't use a soft box on the right hand side or an umbrella, i used a Honeycomb instead, didn't have the attachment for the umbrella. Well spotted mate.