Just 2 more white birds

[pampers]

Well here goes nothing. Just 2 more swans. Just sharpened and cropped. (I will get this right one day.

 

[TinaC]

They are lovely

I'd be inclined not to crop so tight, the whole of the reflections included and just a bit more room in the composition would help.

They do look like a couple of lovers

 

[robertgilbert86]

Maybe do a bit more if it's just sharpened and cropped?

The colours look a bit warm and I think it needs rotating clockwise a little bit. Like Tina mentions, the reflections are a good feature and would be worth making more of.

 

[pampers]

Thank you both for your input . Your comments have been taken onboard