Lost batteries

[MarkVee]

I took this a while ago with my 400d, I would rely appreciate some advice and comments. Thanks

 

[Beagletorque]

The white straw in the middle of the pic is a bit distracting, could be PS'd out though.
Nice use of DoF. Good work.

 

[sawman]

Sorry but it does not work for me.
I do not think the batteries work in such a natural setting.

 

[MarkVee]

Thanks.

The batteries where meant to show how people treat nature. It wasn't rely meant to be a pretty photograph if that makes sense; Hmmm... guess it might not of worked. I'll try and take out the straw from the photo, Thanks for the advice.

 

[sawman]

My interpretation of the shot was that somebody had just discarded some batteries. Which I guess is what you were trying to get across. So the shot did work.

 

[RJL2005]

I like the idea Perhaps if the batteries were corroded and leaking the image might be more striking