My boxer and Cockerpoo....

[jordanogrady]

And advice, editing tips welcome....
Number 1.

Number 2. (Slightly out of focus)

Number 3.

Number 4.

Number 5.

Number 6. Editing tips on this one anyone????

Sorry if there is too many pictures here! Or if you want to see more, there are some on my flickr page that I've just set up today jordanogrady1982

Thanks
Jordan

 

[jordanogrady]

Number 7.

Number 8.

 

[jordanogrady]

Any advice at all? Are they ok?

 

[Cuddy]

A fine set, positives first.

1 great concentration on the dogs face, very animated.

2 Reacting to the stick, or something of too the side ? again animated.

4 Enjoyable interchange between the dogs.

5 dog with attitude, i like.

8 Again good animation, a bit central perhaps..

Negatives now.

5 a bit too OOF, would have liked to see the eye in focus.

7 Bright background pulls my eye away from the subject.

6 No editing tips, shows a dog not being controlled an offence around wildlife.

Sorry if the last seems a bit harsh, but these could well be a nesting pair and desert their nest.

Finally i love the Cockapoo and want one so badly.

 

[jordanogrady]

Thanks for your comments really appreciated, all the comments help out because I know what to look for next time round!

I totally understand on the last comment, I didnt even think about that to be honest, its a bit of a random patch of water to be honest, its just on some flood ground near us, I dont really know much about swans, but they dont stay there, infact they are not there now, the field if full of cows, also the dog cant actually get any further than what he is right now (that doesnt make it ok tho)

I'm a complete novice still, but keep plying around, and my dogs seem to be the things i take most pictures of!

I've just ordered some filters to have a play with, and a welding glass!