Critique My Boy
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- Jordon
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Not in focus and it's a tad underexposed to me.
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- Ben
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Thing is, it's in focus on my pc.. Think i've uploaded the low res to photobucket.. and deleted the larger one..!
I was wondering really on the pic itself, as in style or layout..? ( I should've been more in detail.. Sorry)
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- Andy
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I like that you've tried to do something a bit different with the composition and the crop, but think it has been slightly pushed too far. I think if there was another point of interest on the left it could work, like an old teddy or something maybe.
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I agree with Andy - to me it could do with a reason for the crop & space on the left & shame but it does look OOF - sorry 
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- Dean
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Looks OOF and underexposed to me too, Ben. Primarily because of the artifacts around your sons eyes. Perhaps you could upload the high quality file?
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- Dean
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Oh, I like the neg space though.
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I can also look & like it when I imagine the lad's expression is one of seeing something scary in that left hand corner
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- Faisal
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Nice portrait and expression.