Critique My Choir

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Just before getting up to practice with my choir I took a quick handheld shot of the venue we sang at on Saturday

BGH male voice Choir by NathanBrowning, on Flickr

Comments and criticism all welcome as always

 

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There's far too little about the choir and too much emphasis on the distorted pespective of the church. The distortion's fine but make it more about the choir, i.e. get in much closer to them and make them the subject.