chris321
I like the ginger one
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To be honest I can't fault it, I think its a really good portrait.
yup, very nice particularly for a first attempt
Loks great to me
I like it, particularly the lighting. Although if your after comments, have you done anything to the catchlight in his eye? It seems a tad large, or too bright.If it were muted a bit, it might not stand out as much.
Just my humble opinion...
^^^ im with them^^^
Put your collar down old fruit, there's a good chap
I think that'd make a good B&W conversion. Better than the first as you can still see a bit of detail on the shaded side of your face. The first one was a bit "one sided" for me
also the eyes look a bit oversharpened to me
very nicely done for a first go though
To be honest I can't fault it, I think its a really good portrait.
though I would have said hte first was fairly sharpened - maybe its in camera sharpening?
I think these are both excellent portraits, and wouldn't have not known they were first attempts had you not said...
With the first shot the only thing I wasn't sure about was dark shape on the left hand side with what I think is light from behind the curtain, you may want to consider burning it out so that is doesn't distract away from the main subject.
With regards the catch lights, I believe the rule is that it is better to have only one, as we only have one sun, so you may want to remove the smaller light on the pupil.
I'm not seeing the noise in the second shot david refers to but the pink skin pigmentation on the nose and cheeks could be reduced a little I guess.
Hope this helps, Lee
Yep, very nice shot, lovely and sharp with superb tone
good ... I like it well shotbut why is he blushing...young blokes dont blush