my first photoshoot...

[fleaz]

...in this country

C&C welcomed and very much appreciated.
Thanks for looking.

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[oli]

Nice photos!

i like them, i think some could do with tweaking in terms of brightness? Did you use a reflector? (I think you didnt on these?)

I like no. 9 for the pose. great composition and i'd be pleased with this set.

 

[smooth]

Nos 7 + 9 for me. Spot on focus and excellent poses. Also Bokeh is awesome.

Drawn to number 14 but wonder what it would look like with model more central??

Stunning set!

 

[fleaz]

i like them, i think some could do with tweaking in terms of brightness? Did you use a reflector? (I think you didnt on these?)

I'm still very new to portraits. After I saw the results from the shoot, I ordered one immediately.

 

[fleaz]

Nos 7 + 9 for me. Spot on focus and excellent poses. Also Bokeh is awesome.

Drawn to number 14 but wonder what it would look like with model more central??

Stunning set!

Thank you.

For #14, I cropped off the right side as I felt it might be too distracting.

 

[Bolt]

Nice set of pictures, 9 would be great if she had not just had her elbows on the floor, tad red.

 

[lee]

It looks like you had a good shoot with 4 & 15 being my favourites.

Its a pity that the dof in 12 was a little to shallow as most of her face appears out of focus, and without the reflector to get the extra light on the eyes your not really drawn to them.

Hope this helps. Lee

 

[fleaz]

i would definitely work on that during my next shoot. thanks!