My little girl

Boynielaad

Boynielaad

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Poor light - mid-day and a bit of a grab shot.

Any suggestions how to improve are most welcome.

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Thanks
 
haha, fun expression!
I think a wee levels adjustment would benefit it, just to make it feel more 'alive' like your model :)
Nice dof, my only crit being i think if you would have zoomed out of the scene a little bit and positoned her more off centre it might work better.
 
TinySpark said:
haha, fun expression!
I think a wee levels adjustment would benefit it, just to make it feel more 'alive' like your model :)
Nice dof, my only crit being i think if you would have zoomed out of the scene a little bit and positoned her more off centre it might work better.
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Thanks. Tried the off-centre crop and you're right, it is better.
 
looks okay to me - agree needs a bit more contrast. Nice bokeh on that lens.
 
HAHAHA Great lion impression with her untamed main and that ROAR!!

I really like the energy I would just change the colour balance a little as there seems to be a tiny bit of a green cast to her skin... and maybe a little sharpen maybe...;)
 
My take on it...

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If you don't like it I will remove.. ; )
 
It really was just a tweak of the colour balance in photoshop. I just reduced the green channel and adjusted the other two slightly to bring out a more natural skin tone..
 
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