My Mate's Portfolio attempt
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Love #1, but the rest are very good too!
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A good strong set, number 2 for me! 
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I like the set, and the pp carried out... but why is your mate frowning on most of the shots? Some different and alternate expressions would be beneficial I feel if this were to be his portfolio.
great set all round.
no.3 for me. the mix of different textures and the colours are great.
no. 4 is a little tight on crop
no. 7 reminds me of catalogue shot. (=great!)
agreed with the other comments about the facial expression.
I'd be happy with those for sure!
no.3 for me. the mix of different textures and the colours are great.
no. 4 is a little tight on crop
no. 7 reminds me of catalogue shot. (=great!)
agreed with the other comments about the facial expression.
I'd be happy with those for sure!
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great shots but for a portfolio, i would have thought he would need to show that he can do a variaty of things..
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- Craig Thomas
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thanks for the comments guy,
yep i know he needs to work on the facial expression abit, but in fairness to him this was is first proper bash infront of the camera posing, and he is still a bit uneasy.
I told him the more that he does it the better he is going to get.
yep i know he needs to work on the facial expression abit, but in fairness to him this was is first proper bash infront of the camera posing, and he is still a bit uneasy.
I told him the more that he does it the better he is going to get.
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They only capture one general kind of place, suggesting that city-style areas, is his comfort zone?
Maybe a few with a different setting?
Maybe a few with a different setting?
A very nice set, #3 and #4 are my fav's, the colours are perfect - if you were able to remove the graffiti in those shots then I think it woudl make them that little bit better but I like them as they are as well.... 
#1 is also impressive, great colours again.
- if you were able to remove the graffiti in those shots then I think it woudl make them that little bit better but I like them as they are as well.... #1 is also impressive, great colours again.
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3,5,7 for me, nice set, but as already noted try and vary the models expression
Nice one
Stu
Nice one
Stu
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Very professional looking set, fantastically lit, well exposed, etc etc etc.
However, as has been said, he should have a variety of different poses/props/expressions at his disposal as models need to be versatile to be successful. You are the photographer, and you've photographed him beautifully! However you should give it a second go I reckon.
However, as has been said, he should have a variety of different poses/props/expressions at his disposal as models need to be versatile to be successful. You are the photographer, and you've photographed him beautifully! However you should give it a second go I reckon.
