my puppy

[happygolucky]

Dexter

 

[TinaC]

Awwwww, cute I rather like #1 in terms of the composition

 

[trevorbray]

First one is the better composition. decent portrait.
Second one is too busy in the background, just becomes a snap.
Sadly both have missed focus on the eye.
Remember the eye is the window to the soul. Keep practicing !

 

[RatedF]

I like them, no.2 my fav.

 

[happygolucky]

Thanks guys, here's another just using the ray of light that shone through the window;

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not sure this one works?

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