Same Shot 3 Crops

[milster]

Can't make up my mind which works best with these (if any) I'm thinking of this as a work in progress really as I only had a couple of minutes this morning, not sure I've got the flow of the shot right? any opinions greatly received.

Cheers

Gary

Original Frame


Square


Pano

 

[Peter B]

Third one for me as the slabbed area is a bit too dominant in the others for me. The b&w conversion might benefit from tweaking to separate the shades of grey a bit more.

 

[Danger_MouseUK]

Third one for me as the slabbed are is a bit too dominant in the others for me. The b&w conversion might benefit from tweaking to separate the shades of grey a bit more.

+1

 

[Brazo]

Third shot and up the clarity

 

[MWHCVT]

I have to agree its the third I'd even be tempted to crop a little more still off the bottom, also have the agree that the tones need a little bit more work the range of grey tones make it rather flat...tweaking the channels should drastically improve the image for me...thread was a great thread on here recently with some cracking information at B&W conversions if I find it ill post a link

Edit: link: http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/threads/b-w-camera-or-pp.516537/

 

[milster]

Thanks for the comments chaps. I've kept it as the original frame but I've completely re-done the processing, a bit more gritty feel.

 

[Big Nick]

Gary, normally the feature of beach huts are the bright contrasting colours

Just curious why you went mono?

I prefer the square crop

 

[milster]

I always had this shot in mind as a mono as I don't like the colours of the huts or the slabs