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- Name
- Laura
- Edit My Images
- No
some beautiful models
- Thread starter lauratuttle73
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- Name
- Jim
- Edit My Images
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No1 - The hair is a distraction as it's causing unsightly shadows on the face.
No2 - Much better - Very nice shot.
No3 - I like the scene but there is nothing going on in the faces - drab expressions - and no contact with the camera. Poses (if they are posed) are quite flat too - one has droopy arms and the other weight on both feet......
No4 - Not sure what this is but not an image I would use. Exposed well enough but that's it?
No5 - I think she is turned too much side on. This is creating a sort of "corkscrew" neck where you can see the lines as she's turning her head too much. If her right shoulder was turned more towards the camera I think it would be much stronger.
Exposures are all great and colour nice but work on the posing and composition.
No2 - Much better - Very nice shot.
No3 - I like the scene but there is nothing going on in the faces - drab expressions - and no contact with the camera. Poses (if they are posed) are quite flat too - one has droopy arms and the other weight on both feet......
No4 - Not sure what this is but not an image I would use. Exposed well enough but that's it?
No5 - I think she is turned too much side on. This is creating a sort of "corkscrew" neck where you can see the lines as she's turning her head too much. If her right shoulder was turned more towards the camera I think it would be much stronger.
Exposures are all great and colour nice but work on the posing and composition.