Some Tonkas

[Calum l]

Spent Tuesday up at RAF Lossiemouth capturing the goings on for ex Joint Warrior 14-1. I thought I'd post some shots of the based Tornado Aircraft to see where I can improve etc. All feedback would be much appreciated.

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The camera I used is a Nikon D90 with a Nikon 80-400mm VR Lens.

 

[cw318is]

nice of the strobe to get in on the action in 3! First one I'm not too bothered about, but its just personal taste - if you were trying to achieve moody and menacing I think you've done it. The rest are nicely exposed but could do with having a bit more space in the frame to the left, and a touch of noise reduction as they are a bit grainy. I'd also be tempted to either clone or crop out the tufts at the bottom of 3 and just start with the taxiway.

 

[Calum l]

Thanks for the feedback. I was going for something different with 1 and I realise that it may not to be everyone's taste. I see what you mean about no 3 too - it'd look a lot tidier cropped in slightly. The grain seems to be a problem at iso 400+ but will have a crack at removing it. Thanks again.