Sunset view of the church

[jjmc86]

I think I would change the fact you can slightly see the clock face on the first 2 images.


DSC_0217.jpg by jmc.roofinguk, on Flickr


The roof , the roof, the roof is on firrreeee by jmc.roofinguk, on Flickr


DSC_0150.jpg by jmc.roofinguk, on Flickr

Another one from the Garden, just taken on a different evening...


DSC_0139.jpg by jmc.roofinguk, on Flickr

 

[mrtoad]

i like your last Jay mainly because it isnt a hackneyed red sky
the lemon tones are cleaner and for me a welcome tone against the sillouetting.
in all there is a melancholy of the church and the chimney pots...good feelings there
3 isnt a necessary shot in this group and of the first two...if i had to make a choice it would be 2 for the spiral in the sky

cheers
geoff

 

[jjmc86]

Thank you for taking the time to reply Geoff!

 

[Beav]

Like the colours in the second shot

 

[jjmc86]

Thank you

 

[milster]

There is some potential in these shots, I like the idea and the sillouettes are nice although they could do with some slight compositional adjustments. For me 2 is the one with the most potential but I find the colours/processing in all very unnatural.