tangled wood - Comments please

[Charlie C]

some shots from a recent stroll on dartmoor. Found this awesome tree and fallen branch.

Click images for link to flickr pages with larger versions, they are best veiwed as large as possible: choose "all sizes" in flickr for large version.

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4 (mono of above)


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this is a new type of shooting for me, so please post all you comments good or bad.

Thanks
Charlie

 

[Deleted member 3428]

Sorry Charlie, these aren't doing a great deal for me, they look too complicated and I'm struggling to get a focal point. Not sure quite how to improve them with such a shallow DOF.
The last one is the best I think though as there is less going on.

 

[Charlie C]

thanks AJ i'm not quite sure about these myself, as said above they only really work when large, but i'm still unsure.

 

[chivers67]

I actually like the first image I think I'd have cropped in a little more and had the horizon going "uphill"