Critique The Beast

[Stephen L]

Another from yesterday. This time trying to show power and movement whilst showing the name plate. Don't know if it works. Thoughts?

The Beast by Stephen Lee, on Flickr

 

[Nod]

Almost works IMO. Unfortunately, only the Flying bit of the name is properly clear - the Scotsman is too blurry, even at the biggest size available on Flickr. The orange coated person is a major distraction too.

 

[Stephen L]

Almost works IMO. Unfortunately, only the Flying bit of the name is properly clear - the Scotsman is too blurry, even at the biggest size available on Flickr. The orange coated person is a major distraction too.

Thanks. I appreciate your crit. I was unsure myself.

 

[Kiwi Paul]

Great effort Stephen, nice to see something a bit different, I like it.

 

[Stephen L]

Great effort Stephen, nice to see something a bit different, I like it.

Thanks Paul.

 

[JayceeC]

Almost works IMO. Unfortunately, only the Flying bit of the name is properly clear - the Scotsman is too blurry, even at the biggest size available on Flickr. The orange coated person is a major distraction too.

My thoughts as well, Maybe a meter further on and you may have got it, and possibly chopped the front off ........

 

[superpippo]

I like it .
a Very painterly effect.
good colours prominent because of the grey sky.
plume looks good