I wouldn't worry about the lack of replies, sometimes people can take a little while to get around to it....
In terms of the photo: The blue bar is a huge distraction on the left hand side. I'm not sure the focus is completely nailed either. On the plus side, nice catchlight in the eye, he looks a great subject.
I'm with Neil on this one.
The blue bar & shadow is a big distraction for me.
Spence