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georgebou

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this is a photo of the two friends of mine
what you think?

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Not sure what you were trying to achieve, the picture does nothing for me personally as I would have liked to have seen either one of the girls in focus, to give the picture some depth. It has no focal point.
 
canonrebel said:
Not sure what you were trying to achieve, the picture does nothing for me personally as I would have liked to have seen either one of the girls in focus, to give the picture some depth. It has no focal point.
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What canonrebel said. I'm also struggling to see it as it's a bit dark.
 
canonrebel said:
Not sure what you were trying to achieve, the picture does nothing for me personally as I would have liked to have seen either one of the girls in focus, to give the picture some depth. It has no focal point.
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:agree:
 
Sorry but I don't get it either.
 
Sorry, but not a lot to be honest, it is simply all wrong.

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Apologies George, and to the forum, the above was totally out of character from me to be so critical, it was not justified, especially in the manner it was written.
 
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I don't think it is wrong, but it would be a lot better if both girls would be in focus. I like the lighting though :)
 
I don't normally do this... but I think it's a cracking shot...just needed a bit of help..

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if the front girl was in focus it would be an interesting shot, especially with eyemo's edit it.

I would also have shot another frame with the other girl in focus to compare them, but with the neither girl sharp its a bit odd tbh
 
I agree.. this shot has something.... if it was sharp ..better... and focused on both girls/either girls would be an advantage.... but it has a quality that I'm impressed with..:)
 
I have to agree with the others, OOF, too dark, no focal point etc...
 
Firstly, I think I know what you were going for here, and I think the idea has a lot of promise. A couple of simple things would make all the difference. For me it's a little too dark, and the the model in the foreground should be in focus. The other issue is there appears to be a dead/rogue pixel on the face of the rear model.

I think this is a good idea, but the execution needs brushing up slightly. Might be my monitor, but the white balance seems a little yellow, but that's easily fixed.
 
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