The Kite Flyer

[SpidersEye]

My first submission in the P&P section ...

Taken in Edinburgh today:

I'd like to know what you think of this, and any advice on how it could be improved would be much appreciated.

Thanks for looking

 

[birdy961]

Um, I actually think it would be better without the kite etc, I think the pillars are very strong and like the composition but the kite is a bit lost.

 

[SpidersEye]

Thanks very much for your comments. I see what you mean about the kite, it's shame I didn't catch it just a bit earlier because it crashed seconds after I took the picture!