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Walking around the harbour and took these. Any use?
Beginner Tried something out
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My personal views.
The first one - that yellow blob on the bottom distracts, you may need to think about moving or changing viewpoint to avoid that stuff, or consider removing it in post. I think there's a shot in the first one somewhere, but I'm not sure that's it.
The second - interesting subject, I like rust, but it's confused. Is it a shot of the gear, the railing, or the wood. Best of the three though, deserves a second trip and different angles of view.
The third one - I don't think the really shallow depth of field works, or, the chain links in the bottom right could do with being in focus, and then the DoF trailing away, rather than the middle of the chain being in focus. Again, interesting subject and worth another visit.
The first one - that yellow blob on the bottom distracts, you may need to think about moving or changing viewpoint to avoid that stuff, or consider removing it in post. I think there's a shot in the first one somewhere, but I'm not sure that's it.
The second - interesting subject, I like rust, but it's confused. Is it a shot of the gear, the railing, or the wood. Best of the three though, deserves a second trip and different angles of view.
The third one - I don't think the really shallow depth of field works, or, the chain links in the bottom right could do with being in focus, and then the DoF trailing away, rather than the middle of the chain being in focus. Again, interesting subject and worth another visit.
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Cool, thanks. As I said, just tried it out, so nice to have a bit of feedback.