Don't crop it.
The slightly less saturated version is better though, retains a bit more detail in the sky.
I think the bottom edge of the frame is what could've been improved. It looks a bit 'unconsidered' here, leaving a slightly odd crop on most of the people and groups in the foreground.
I may have tried taking the shot from lower down (sat/lay on the floor) and possibly tried to include an interesting person in the foreground. I would've shot a similar framing to yours with regards to the sky, and probably another one with far more sky as well.