Thanks for the critique.
I'll expand on some of the points raised, as I appreciate I operate in a different environment to most and rarely post any background information about my work.
-I didn't want to go for the 'sheer-numbers' look of typical star-trails images, but rather a dozen or so striking trails. Hence the low ISO. The idea behind the shot was to create a commercial night shot of some hardware that was different, but I also wanted a more minimalist-look to the shot which above all else looked clean and simple.
-The POV is actually lower than it may appear (I was sat on a gorilla-box with the camera just below knee-height).
-The shot was taken on an active aircraft pan on a foreign base in the Middle-East with other on-going aircraft movements, so I was very limited in terms of location, space and most importantly the operational security of our presence in that location. The combination of this meant I had an area only slightly larger than the aircraft itself to work in along with a working knowledge of the things I wasn't allowed to include, which primarily involved anything that could tie us to a particular location given the unrest in the surrounding areas at the time and anything which could identify any of the other foreign nations operating with us at that time. I was fortunate enough that in this very restrictive sand-box I had to play in, Polaris was in almost the position I wanted and that nothing compromising was in the background.
-It's a subjective one, but the Typhoon (as with anything else) is devastatingly pretty from some angles and ugly from others. Having worked in and around these aircraft now for several years photographically, I have my favourites and the side-profile of a single-seater is one of them. The rear 3/4 shot seems to work well on the twin-sticks as the fuselage coming away from the canopy towards the tail is much more pronounced, but it makes the single-seaters look strange and elongated.
Taking images in this environment can be extremely rewarding, but inevitably also extremely frustrating and difficult. With more 'usual' constraints as above, there are also the ever-shifting political implications which often (and indeed in my case) lead to hundreds of images being held because the motivation or political image of those involved has changed. Happily, this one has since been cleared for release although has yet to be utilised for anything other than a couple of small articles.
Apologies for the long and boring reply, hopefully that clears up some of the limitations I operate in before I can even consider those of the camera!