what would make this better

[gumbo-67]

i took this of my nephew at his parents wedding. he was bored and messing about only had seconds to take this.

 

[Dave Stone]

I think a little sharpening and a tighter crop.. Nice shot though.

 

[AndyB]

I think I would back off the saturation a little. That pink is VIVID!

 

[gumbo-67]

Thanks for your replys. and the advice given i will have a play.

I know what you are saying about the pink But that WAS the colour of the dresses...much to my non pink/dress wearing daughter but will try and clam it down

 

[AndyB]

Hehe - well on my laptop it doesn't look so bad but on my big screen it's veeeery bright. Colourfull though