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_DSC0869-1 by Ben Gray, on Flickr
Good effort
A) looks a little dark
B) I would have liked to see either more of the flowers in focus OR the single flower more isolated such that it isn't nearly overlapping with the others. How it's framed makes them one subject to me.
Thank you for the opinions guys, looking again, I think you are both right about it being a little too dark.•
I have an other PoV if the minimalist approach was the
chosen option. Yes, technically, a tad too dark with too
shallow DoF. Even the colours and the tonal range are
too subdued.
But then again, if the minimalist approach was the cho-
sen option, that decision would take this rendition under
the artistic intent tab and, in that case, well done.
Ah, they are not all in the background, the lone OOF flower is actually in front of the focus point and would have obscured the focused flower from down and left.But still the background flowers overlap, shot from a touch down and to the left would have put it in its own space and also made a nice symmetry with the OOF flowers.