1st try with smoke

[matt b]

Hi all
This is my first try with inverted smoke. Please tell me what you think and feel free to be as harsh as you like

invertsmoke4 by matt barton, on Flickr


invertsmoke3 by matt barton, on Flickr


invertsmoke2 by matt barton, on Flickr


invertsmoke1 by matt barton, on Flickr

Thanks for looking.
Matt

 

[stupar]

Hi Matt,

A good strong first set of inverted smoke shots.
I like the first three - #1 & 2 for composition and #3 for striking colour!

4 doesn't float my boat that much, think the green is a weak colour against the pure white background.
I always edit for strong colours rather than pastel shades, but thats just me.

 

[Just Dave]

Like the first can see a womans face and a horse prancing or jumping

 

[Yanzi]

Brilliant! Great set, even more so for a first try. Mine were a disaster.

I really like how I can interpret a few images out of them. I can see part of a face in the first one, 2 looks a bit like a treble clef!

 

[matt b]

Hi Matt,

A good strong first set of inverted smoke shots.
I like the first three - #1 & 2 for composition and #3 for striking colour!

4 doesn't float my boat that much, think the green is a weak colour against the pure white background.
I always edit for strong colours rather than pastel shades, but thats just me.

Thank you
I'm not keen on the green one, but the wife liked it:shrug:

 

[matt b]

Like the first can see a womans face and a horse prancing or jumping

Thank you
After looking i can see the face in the top half.

 

[stupar]

Thank you
I'm not keen on the green one, but the wife liked it:shrug:

Women eh.......Always got to different!!!!!

 

[matt b]

Brilliant! Great set, even more so for a first try. Mine were a disaster.

I really like how I can interpret a few images out of them. I can see part of a face in the first one, 2 looks a bit like a treble clef!

Thank you
The first pics were :thumbsdown:. These were after about 50-60 takes.

 

[matt b]

Women eh.......Always got to different!!!!!

This one is, never agrees with any thing i say

 

[stupar]

This one is, never agrees with any thing i say

For them they are always right even when they are wrong, for us when we are right....we are still wrong!

 

[matt b]

For them they are always right even when they are wrong, for us when we are right....we are still wrong!

I've just been told i'm wrong and she is not like that

 

[matt b]

And a few more.


smoke72 by matt barton, on Flickr


invertsmoke7 by matt barton, on Flickr


smoke8 by matt barton, on Flickr


invertsmoke5 by matt barton, on Flickr
I don't like this one but:shrug: