2nd portrait

scooby

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Hi people here is another portrait of the GF looking for some C&C


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Thanks for looking
All the best
Rob
 
Have to say, nice tats.

Good idea but something's not quite right. Maybe the shadow under her face and the uneven light on her face. Looks like a torch shining on her.

Keep at it tho(y)
 
Not against tattoos in the slightest, but maybe try a shot with the arm lowered, I find the tattoo a little distracting.

Also maybe try bringing the light source up a little, I find the shadow makes me think of someone sitting in-front of a monitor/Laptop screen, and finally maybe have the eyes a little higher in the frame.
 
BRASH said:
Have to say, nice tats.

Good idea but something's not quite right. Maybe the shadow under her face and the uneven light on her face. Looks like a torch shining on her.

Keep at it tho(y)
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That may have been the effect Scooby was after..??!!

I like it, it is different, and shows imagination. OK, there are a few technical things not quite right, but heck photography is so subjective that almost anything goes...:)

Nice one.
 
Hey Rob... why not attempt to 'look as though it was a candle...' but rather actually use a candle...?
 
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