An attempt at abstract

Warspite

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Taken during the summer when I was meaning to post pics but being myself never got round to it;( I'm sure some of you can guess what it is - no prizes I'm afraid;)

I like it, but what do you think?
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Thanks for looking:thumb:
 
Difficult subject well executed ! I like this - my kind of shot ! Not sure a completely blue sky might have enhanced it ?
 
As Venominator says, it's well shot but I think it lacks punch? if that's the right word.

/edit, had a quick play with the levels I hope that's ok.

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umm I don't know what it is,lol. Guess it isn't in my neck of the woods huh? If I remember correctly though Steve had taken shots of this for the black and white comp. Anyway I think it works well. I like it. Sorry I can't give more of a critique than that.

Cheers,
Jewel
 
Very good, eye-catching composition but I find the grey/blue contrast a bit bland. Very well executed.
 
I don't think it works, but hey.... abstract is difficult.
 
Right composition, I think - maybe wait for a better sky?
Or go completely bananas and alter the colours completely?
 
Thanks for the comments and advice:)

On reflection I have to agree that the sky should have been an overall blue - your comments and Steep's edit prove that and are truly appreciated :thumb:

Just for Jewel, this is the rest of the structure:

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The Gateshead Millennium Bridge
 
Thank you so much of this wonderful shot of my home town. I am now be-devilled with homesickness.;)

Shouldn't that read Newcastle Milennium Bridge? :whistle2: :smilenod:
 
wow awsome shot and awsome bridge, i pressume it swings up for shipping otherwise, thats some angle to walk across.
 
very cool! well spotted, have you tried a tighter crop at the top?
 
Again thanks for the comments:)

True Cav, we all call it the Newcastle Millennium Bridge (as it should be;)) - but someone went and stuck this on the side of it:
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Sorry for making you homesick - I never realized;)

Yes Barrymoir, it raise like a hinge to allow vessels to pass beneath it.

Never got around to editing it - if you want to feel free though:thumb:

Lots and lots of shots Jewel:)
 
I'm not sure if it works as an abstract, the clouds give the game away, but it's a nice image none the less.
 
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