Critique Another couple of heads

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Here's another shot of the Floating Heads Installation by Sophie Cave that I took at Kelvingrove Museum in Glasgow last week. Shot with my nikor 55-200mm lens.

I've had another go at editing/processing, trying to add a touch more warmth as well as removing the wires and tidying up the edges a little to remove the unwanted light from the rhs. I tried to keep the object slightly off centre (as it was in the original) but I'm not sure if I should have or if I should have kept the piece of archway on the lhs either.

I'm not sure if the 'speckling' I can see on the top of the head is actually on the installation or down to a poor lens/poor focusing/poor screen resolution.

For what it's worth I was trying to capture a 'falling out' between friends here.


Any pointers, criticism or advice is welcome.


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