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hi would anyone like to give me feedback
thank for your time
thank for your time
arundel castle
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Hi, you need to say if you were trying to achieve a particular effect or atmosphere with the image.
As it is, the composition is fine - the castle fills the frame nicely and the left wall is straight against the edge.
However, and sorry if this seems a bit harsh, it seems a bit out of focus and (in my opinion) lacking contrast.
I am assuming that the warm toning is intentional to give it an old feel. If this was your aim, then the softness does work with that retro look.
As an architectural record of the building it does the job. To make it a bit more aesthetic, I'd maybe lighten it a touch, add a bit of contrast and desaturate it a tiny bit.
Hope this helps.
Cheers
L
As it is, the composition is fine - the castle fills the frame nicely and the left wall is straight against the edge.
However, and sorry if this seems a bit harsh, it seems a bit out of focus and (in my opinion) lacking contrast.
I am assuming that the warm toning is intentional to give it an old feel. If this was your aim, then the softness does work with that retro look.
As an architectural record of the building it does the job. To make it a bit more aesthetic, I'd maybe lighten it a touch, add a bit of contrast and desaturate it a tiny bit.
Hope this helps.
Cheers
L
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Thank you I will have a go and post back still trying out things on Photoshop again thank you for taking the time to give me feedback
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I see where you were going with this but it looks underexposed on my monitor. It might also look slightly better if you use the Lens Correction filter to straighten up the verticals.
