Never saw your first one so can't comment on whether this one's better or not. Don't do birds myself, but know how hard they are to capture, which you've managed well. It's sharp enough, and quite an amusing pose you've caught as well.
Only distraction was having to scroll down past acres of green to get to the bird - If it was mine, I might have been tempted to see whether a crop would work.
Like the shot, looks a bit better than your first due to the BG colour, does look like there is too much space at the top, not unnecessarily wrong, but maybe lose a small bit.
Cheers, find it hard to get much closer to the birds....Is there anything obvious that i could do to improve?
A bit too much space at the top of the frame, but otherwise it's not too bad!
A bit too much space at the top of the frame, but otherwise it's not too bad!