I think this is a case of less is more. The shot itself is powerful, full of interest and drama, with interesting composition. The HDR, contrast and saturation are all overdone for my tastes. Detail has been lost rather than enhanced and the end result feels too unnatural and garish to sit comfortably with me.
Looking at your blog I see some great shots, and a few like this that have imho been over edited. You have a good eye, you just need to consider the editing that will enhance an image over editing that will take over the final image.
Hope that all makes sense. Keep up the good work.