Day dreaming....

[V8burble]

My niece, looking out across the garden on a sunless day

C&C welcome of course

 

[a1ex2001]

Beautifull capture and well posed, I like the b&w conversion it really seems to suit the image only slight criticism is the lack of DOF I would have cranked it up a little to keep slightly more detail in her right eye.

 

[V8burble]

Beautifull capture and well posed, I like the b&w conversion it really seems to suit the image only slight criticism is the lack of DOF I would have cranked it up a little to keep slightly more detail in her right eye.

Thanks for your kind comment.

Yes my thought aswell during PP. The annoying thing is I had a bit of shutter speed left to play with to at 1/160", but expected f/2.2 to be just about ok, and still separate her from the window frame properly. Also if I'd focused perfectly between her eyes, rather than her right one it might just have swung it. On the whole I'm happy with it for all the right things, but I'll learn from it that's for sure.

 

[leezon]

Cracking composition and a lovely looking girl.

I would add more contrast to make it pop a bit more

 

[V8burble]

Cracking composition and a lovely looking girl.

I would add more contrast to make it pop a bit more

Thank you.

Well ok a touch more contrast then, but don't want to take away the dreamy element

Think I pref the original, but may be my monitor LOL

 

[Toothie]

i like the edit it has more punch

 

[V8burble]

Ok I've wound down the contrast a bit on my monitor

Thanks Ruth