Well, In for a penny in for a pound, I do not find the shot,s contrasty at all, in my opinion I find them very flat with very little tonality on each shot. The composition is good and the subject matter interesting.
If I was to point the finger it would be, that the shots are taken with an orange filter and you had them processed at Asda, who promptly killed any feeling in the shot and hit the"lets do this reel as if" button. It is a real shame that we sometimes cannot wait for processing and if we could the results would be so much better.
My offer to you is this.
http://www.photo-express.co.uk/
Very good value and a .50p per film discount to TP members, just quote your TP name. You will see the difference.
Regards,
Richard.