Look into my eyes, look into my eyes, the eyes, the eyes, not around the eyes, don't look around my eyes, look into my eyes, you're under!
I love it... just as it is!
It really works for me, in this case I think its a good thing that it leaves you wanting to see the rest of him, that youre left wondering what he's looking at.
Imo its spot on the way the light falls on his fur around the eyes, it really is a shot all about the eyes, and they have a very 'Uh! oh!' expression about them ... no need for anything else.
It genuinely did make me chuckle as soon as I opened this.
It appeals to my sense of humour and immagination ... and its nice to see you using yours!
As I said, I just love it as it is!