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Trout flies.Nice & sharp (the pic not the hooks) Shame you cut off the top feather though. Maybe try them all one above the other all pointing the one way. Maybe slightly staggered & then take in portrait format?
The pins.Again just a pity about the cut off ones.
Good effort though.
The pins.Again just a pity about the cut off ones.
Good effort though.
Very nice use of colour. 
Textured background disturbs me a bit simply because it's quite sharp. If you could throw it out of focus it would be better or use plain.
Maybe it's my screen, but #1 could do with being a bit brighter? Or maybe it's just overwhelmed by the large amount of black in the shot?
Great ideas though. Like to see you develop them.
Textured background disturbs me a bit simply because it's quite sharp. If you could throw it out of focus it would be better or use plain.
Maybe it's my screen, but #1 could do with being a bit brighter? Or maybe it's just overwhelmed by the large amount of black in the shot?
Great ideas though. Like to see you develop them.
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Like the shot with the flies, good lighting.
Have a bit of a play around with them, prick them into something and line them up to try different DOF, colour contrasts etc, ......... hours of endless fun,..... and good for learning....... and a cheap night in.
Dave ....
Have a bit of a play around with them, prick them into something and line them up to try different DOF, colour contrasts etc, ......... hours of endless fun,..... and good for learning....... and a cheap night in.
Dave ....
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They look pretty good to me, well done
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Trout flies - think it would be better with a white background as it could show more detail in the feathers, which is lost against the textured black.
Pins - I like this one but as someone else has already said, it would have been better to have complete pins in the frame.
White flie - might be my eyes but it seems as though the hook & cork are in focus and the flie is blurred?
Yellow flie - seems better focus on this one.
as someone has already said, great subject to play around with, happy snapping!
Pins - I like this one but as someone else has already said, it would have been better to have complete pins in the frame.
White flie - might be my eyes but it seems as though the hook & cork are in focus and the flie is blurred?
Yellow flie - seems better focus on this one.
as someone has already said, great subject to play around with, happy snapping!
I quite liked the effect because I thought it gave a sense of motion/drama to the pic.