First ever posted pic..Opinions please

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Hello all
As a new member I thought I would say hello and ask for a little honest critique.
I'm quite new to photography but have aspirations to eventually try and make a living from it :wacky:
Peoples opinion of the attached pic would be greatly appreciated (Good or bad as its the only way to learn!)
Cheers
Dave

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Composition: Good
Exposure: Spot on
Lighting: Good
Post Processing: Good, BW works

Tell me did you softfocus process, or is this out of camera. Even with softfocus processing I like the eyes( including the lashes) to be sharp. It emphasizes the eye and draws the viewer in.

Stunning model aswell.

M
 
Great shot :). Love the expression on her face, especially her eyes.
 
ask for a little honest critique
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I am all thumbs of portraits, but I have one idea.
Three main things make this portrait.
Eyes, lips, fingers.
Views of all are attracted these like a magnet.
These tree things have to be ideally. I wanted to say about the manicure...
IMHO
I didn't want to offend your job. It's my little honest critique ;)
 
Marcell said:
Composition: Good
Exposure: Spot on
Lighting: Good
Post Processing: Good, BW works

Tell me did you softfocus process, or is this out of camera. Even with softfocus processing I like the eyes( including the lashes) to be sharp. It emphasizes the eye and draws the viewer in.

Stunning model aswell.

M
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Thanks Marcell.
Shot in RAW, PP in Photoshop
 
elektro said:
I am all thumbs of portraits, but I have one idea.
Three main things make this portrait.
Eyes, lips, fingers.
Views of all are attracted these like a magnet.
These tree things have to be ideally. I wanted to say about the manicure...
IMHO
I didn't want to offend your job. It's my little honest critique ;)
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No offence taken :) All comments appreciated.
 
Lovely model with stunning eyes great composition (y)
Welcome to the forum
 
Hello and welcome,

Like this shot , nicely done! try and bring out the eyes with some PP and smooth the fingernals.

Good job ***'
Will
 
i like this photo,trying portraits myself at the moment,hope they turnout this good
 
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